Comments on: How To Add A Touch Of Japanese Style To Your Home

By: chicka_number_aik

chicka_number_aik — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 18:10:59 +0000

Wow. That’s one heck of a poem and is awesome! I write poetry myself and i’ve never heard a better poem than this. I don’t think you gf will have any probs w/this poem. it’s so romantic and so sweet , esp towards her. I say you go for because if you don’t do it now, who knows what can happen if you wait too long?What you need u to do is think about how you feel towards giving her the poem. Do you think that she will like it? I have no objection. I personally think she’s gonna love it. Make sure though that the mood and atmosphere are romantic. But before you take in any words of advice from us:
Listen to your heart.
It’ll lead you the way.
Listen to your soul
or give it away
Why ask others
When your heart is the one?
Listen to your heart and
It’ll never let you down.
Your innermost feelings
Will let you know
The one path
That you must go.
All your Confusions
Will die away.
Listen to your heart
And it’ll show you the way.

Hey. It’s not just you dealing with rough years. We all are at one time or another. The best thing to do is just let the pain go. Just let it go. Take a deep breath, count to ten and let it out. Relax yourself of stress because stressing is dangerous. It can honestly hurt you memory part in the brain. Don’t feel unloved any time. There is one person out there in the world that’s thinking of you. Remember, To the world you may be just one person, but to one person, you may be the world. Try and try your hardest to make her love you, but don’t push her into it. That could lead her away. Every time u talk to her or r with her, b yourself, because there’s nothing better. Be confident. Listen to her and what she has to say about her year or feelings or life, etc… Let her know how you feel. Slowly approach her with loving comments. Be a friend to her as well as her man. Be understading towards her. All these things will help you go near her. As far as life goes, just go with the flow. Life brings you rotten eggs, throw them out, but when life brings you flowers, let them blossom everywhere. Let their color flow. As far as finances go, look at some qualities you have. Are u a good writer? Judging from the poem, it seems like u r. If so find a job that has to do with your writing skills. What are some other things you are strong in? Whatever your strenghts are, dominate them. Use them for your benefits. Find a job that covers your strenghts. Put in a good word for yourself, ask your friends to do likewise. Girls, well, the come and go. But your girl won’t ever leave you. You’ll know is that girl is your girl. You feel it. You’ll feel her around u when she’s not, you’ll think about her constantly. You will feel like your world is in her arms. All the cruelty of the world will melt away when you see her. All the coldness around you will be so warm with her around. When you find her, don’t let her go. don’t do anything that’ll push her away. Anyways, i think your gf will love the poem, not only because it’s absolutely wonderful, but you wrote it, and from the heart and you took your time. Best of luck with everything. Hope this helped.
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By: Rogue

Rogue — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 18:08:59 +0000

I know you must have worked really hard on this…Dude, its too long….seriously….also, talking about your Ex in a poem for your present girlfriend?
Not only is that retarded, but it tells her your ex is still on your mind…Men should never talk about their ex’s with their new woman….wrong, wrong….
If I were you, I would shorten it up a ton, and write about your relationship with your girl…what it was, what it is now, and what you want for the two of you in the future…
Good luck.
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By: MB

MB — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 18:06:59 +0000

that's called a novel, not a poem. it does help to write down your thoughts. i feel your pain.
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By: Ashton M

Ashton M — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 18:04:59 +0000

Sounds like the LFO song a little. The one called Girl on tv or something. The poem is okay but to be fair I hate poems.
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By: PENOKANATOR

PENOKANATOR — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 18:02:59 +0000

WOW!!!! Ladies and Gentlemen…we have a future star on our hands here!!! DAMM boy…you ever thought about writing songs (cuz that would be a HIT) It.s f’n FLY.

one thing however. maybe you could do someting about that alex keaton phrase. you have you and me…but only one name. just a suggestion.

No matter…that s*** is still off the chain
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By: prabhakar rao

prabhakar rao — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 18:00:59 +0000

is it poem?
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By: i_am_mattsgirl0001

i_am_mattsgirl0001 — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 17:58:59 +0000

LOVE IT!!!!! XD
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By: Lindy Giraffe

Lindy Giraffe — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 17:56:59 +0000

its cute but it kinda sounds like another song… i dont remember what its called…
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By: nicoley oley

nicoley oley — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 17:54:59 +0000

i love it. i think she will like it too... let me know what she thinks!!
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By: Spot

Spot — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 17:52:59 +0000

yes she will it is spot on.
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